Last year on this date I posted the following review on Examiner.com. Since that time, Examiner has ceased to exist and pulled all their context off the internet. So, here's another one saved for posterity...
The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey
extended edition
The extended edition of "The
Hobbit: an Unexpected Journey" was screened in select theaters Monday. The
screening was part of an event which will include all the extended versions of
the three movies over three
evenings. The two other movies, "The
Desolation of Smaug" and "The Battle of the Five Armies," will
be presented Wednesday and next Thursday – one movie each evening. To find a
theater near you, check out the Fathom Events website.
The movie shown Monday night is the
same version as the DVD and Blu-ray extended edition which was released in
November of 2013. Although many find the almost-three-hour theatrical cut more
than enough, the eighteen minutes of additional footage fills some gaps in the
story, especially regarding the motivation of the dwarves sneaking away from
Rivendell. In the Prelude, the footage of young Bilbo interacting with Gandalf
not only adds a welcome tidbit about the character, but also helps the pacing.
Even the Goblin Town song was a nice tribute to Tolkien, although it does
extend that scene too long.
In dividing the story into three
parts, the writers had to make choices on how to make each part complete—an
entire story within a story. This affects the character arc of the protagonist.
Specifically for "An Unexpected Journey," by the end of the movie
Bilbo reaches a point of being admired by the dwarves which he has not attained
by that point in the book. Which is not so bad in itself, if it were not for
the way in which he reaches it.
Tolkien’s Bilbo is no warrior, and
he never becomes one. He earns the dwarves’ respect in more subtle ways.
Jackson’s Bilbo, on the other hand, has a rather berserker-like moment, gaining
him the admiration of Thorin. Ironically, the screenwriters, not Tolkien, are
the ones who put these words in Gandalf’s mouth:
True courage is about knowing, not when to take
a life, but when to spare one.
Unlike some dialog placed in his
mouth by the filmmakers, these words of Gandalf are ones Tolkien would most
likely agree with. Tolkien’s hobbits are not great warriors; their strength
lies not so much in being able to fight with swords, but in being able to think
with their brains, and act prudently from a wise heart. Jackson and crew find the
words to express this, but are often unable to back up the words by what their
hobbits do.
It is true that in the book Bilbo
does play the hero later with the giant spiders. But he has also gained the use
of the ring at that point, so it is not quite as heroic an act as Jackson’s
Bilbo taking on an orc. The sequence has some other problems, such as the
inconsistency of Azog telling one of his orcs to cut off Thorin’s head after
specifically telling his cohorts that Thorin was his to kill. Jackson and crew rightly
decided Bilbo was not ready to tackle Azog, but the way this plays out just
does not make sense.
Part of what has made "The
Hobbit" and "The Lord of the Rings" so great is the “everyman”
character of Bilbo, Sam, and, to a lesser extent, Frodo. In the fifth chapter
of Colin Duriez’ biography of Tolkien, "The Making of a Legend," he
comments how Tolkien was pleased with (fellow-Inkling) Charles Williams’
evaluation of what would become "The Lord of the Rings." In a letter
to his son Christopher, Tolkien comments upon the roles of Bilbo, Sam, and
Frodo ("Letters of J.R.R. Tolkien," p. 105-6):
"Cert[ainly] Sam is the most
closely drawn character, the successor to Bilbo of the first book, the genuine
hobbit. Frodo is not so interesting, because he has to be highminded, and has
(as it were) a vocation. The book will prob[ably] end up with Sam. Frodo will
naturally become too ennobled and rarefied by the achievement of the great
Quest, and will pass West with all the great figures; but S[am] will settle down
to the Shire and gardens and inns. C[harles] Williams who is reading it all
says the great thing is that its centre is not in strife and war and heroism
(though they are understood and depicted) but in freedom, peace, ordinary life
and good liking. Yet he agrees that these very things require the existence of
a great world outside the Shire – lest they should grow stale by custom and
turn into the humdrum…."
For Tolkien, war and heroism are on
the periphery. They are part of the story, and a catalyst for change in his
protagonists, but they are never the main focus. Jackson makes them the main
focus, with “freedom, peace, ordinary life” at the periphery. It is probably a
subtle difference to many fans, but an important one. When the focus is on
heroism and war, too often the result is an attitude of "winning at any
cost." As Jesus said, "what do you benefit if you gain the whole
world but lose your own soul?" [Mark 8:36 NLT]
Jackson’s prologue, besides being a
shift in emphasis from the mundane to war, fails because it is not Bilbo’s
story. Why does it start with Bilbo saying he hadn’t told his whole story to
Frodo, and then proceed with a history lesson from long ago? There is a jarring
disconnect there. The later flashback, continuing the dwarves’ story, works
much better coming out of the mouth of Balin, who was actually there. When we
finally get back to where Bilbo actually comes into the story, the famous first
few lines of JRR Tolkien’s book, written in a narrative, third-person style,
sound strange coming from the Hobbit’s mouth. As much as PJ and company wanted
to meet fans’ expectations by including those words, they should have been able
to come up with a better way to present them. (Would a hobbit actually call his
home a “hole in the ground”?)
The Unexpected Party sequence of the
film, despite having some brilliant moments, is rather tedious and drawn out.
The rest of the movie is rather well paced, but once Thorin arrives on the
scene, the mood becomes somber for too long. Even Bilbo’s fainting spell falls
a little flat.
There are some other problems, like
the over-the-top video-game-like fight sequences in the goblin tunnels, and the
anti-climatic demise of the Great Goblin. The screenwriters seem to be
attempting to combine both the darkness of "The Lord of the Rings"
and the whimsy of "The Hobbit." Jackson did a great job in "The
Lord of the Rings" providing comic relief while telling a dark story. But
his attempt at whimsy this time around sometimes comes off as childish rather
then whimsical.
However, one whimsical sequence that
did work rather well was the Trolls. Some fans have complained a bit about the
crude bathroom humor, but after all, they are Trolls! The scene does find a
balance between tension and comic relief, and gives Bilbo a chance to show his
quick wit, even if it was Gandalf’s wit that saved the day in the book.
Despite the misplaced, over-the-top
heroism of Bilbo, Jackson does end the first movie with a positive change in
the hobbit's attitude. Tolkien’s subtitle to "The Hobbit,"
"There and Back Again," was meant as more than just a physical
summary of what happens in the book. Tolkien, as a soldier in the First World
War, knew what it was like to live a life of relative ease and to be thrust
into a "wild" environment. The "adventure" many young
British men found themselves in either made or broke them. As with Bilbo, their
safety certainly could not be guaranteed. (About a million British soldiers
lost their lives the The Great War.) Those who went there and came back were never
the same.
Tolkien’s book is more than just an
adventure. If Bilbo had understood fully what he was to endure, I’m sure he
would never have left the Shire. But he was better off going. Peter Jackson at least seems to understand that the story is about
more than a change of physical location. Tolkien certainly would not have
approved of Bilbo becoming the crazed warrior he is already becoming by the end
of the first movie. But he would approve that Bilbo now cares about more than
his own comfort. The journey started out as an “adventure” to satisfy his
Tookish predilections. It is now about wanting to help the Dwarves regain their
home. Not a bad motivation to keep him going.